jewel
Seated Officer
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Post by jewel on Feb 17, 2009 8:08:37 GMT 1
[this post was never here, if you think it was here you are lying to yourself, nothing to see here, move along, move along > n >]
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Post by Tahoshi on Feb 17, 2009 8:35:57 GMT 1
Something about Zanpakutoh. It's not something thats really wrong with your character, but it's a point i'd like to make.
A Zanpakutoh is a part of the Shinigami's spirit. How-ever many blades there are, it's still a part of you. For that reason, I would like to suggest something different for your Zanpakutoh...
As you left on your mission, you were a lowly shinigami, no special powers of note. During your missions, you spoke to your Zanpakutoh, and unlocked your Shikai... Your Shikai is a double-blade zanpakutoh (two swords) and is permanently unlocked (think like Ichigo, always in Shikai) You could have two 'named skills' that you can call out to use the attacks, for instance - your current shikai phrases could just be named abilities.
Well done though, you have plenty of Reiatsu for someone with an 'insanely strong shield'.
This is all just suggestions, use them if you wish, or stick with what you've got. Your 2nd sword though won't be part of your zanpakutoh, so it can be broken easily.
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